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Maybe the mission of MR is to bring bullet points to the sheeple.

To the nationalist aristocracy, more like.

listen, there is an aristocracy
but hidden, hinted at in demeanor
or cropping out, outlying orgule
as if one had tempted: come see your crown
clouds hide fires and the moon is gone
wake dust of stars from the seeming opaque
each conical palp shedding vortex from vertex
of nanokrill instars everready to molt
in their turn shedding vortices, tiny antennae
embedded within the abyss between zero
and dot dot dot (not a number) but wonder
at where in the infinite sequence or ladder
is useless. either the same thing is said
or—there it goes, rehiving off
the selfsame selfsimilar image
no name in its infinite language
analemmatic, not even for queen
bearing the deluge before her
drowning all but the distal massif
it is . . . one cannot say it
aspiring sparks snuffed by failure of deixis
now fading to dark purple dye in the eye
listen: johanna rules the 3rd kingdom

 

see sloot, espc. the Translator’s Note.

Posted by Søren Renner on Wednesday, May 13, 2009 at 11:34 AM in
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Posted by guest on May 13, 2009, 12:59 PM | #

Pompous shit of a reply as usual from snobby site.

*Bookmark removed*

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Posted by Guest on May 13, 2009, 03:57 PM | #

Have you been drinking?

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Posted by Genophobic Xenophile on May 13, 2009, 04:34 PM | #

Intellectualism not balanced with physical training, skill development, and physical service to the group promotes behavior which serves Jewish interests.

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Posted by Captainchaos on May 13, 2009, 05:14 PM | #

Intellectualism not balanced with physical training, skill development, and physical service to the group promotes behavior which serves Jewish interests.

Yet the former, which is required for real revolutionary leadership, is much more rare than the raw material available to fulfill the latter.  I’ve had conversations with “gangstas” who are allegedly “hardcore” (un sheet) about firearms and their use in combat.  By their own admission, they possess no real expertise in their use (spray and hope for the best really is about it) nor any real courage to fight on to victory at whatever cost to themselves.  That is because they are fight with their “brothas” (and because they are “brothas”) and not for their brothers.  But if we want our brothers to fight with us first we must get them to believe, and that takes leadership and some intellect.

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Posted by Thunder on May 13, 2009, 06:00 PM | #

Guest

If you do not like Soren’s contribution don’t read it.  Why throw the baby out with the bathwater (remove bookmark)?  Most of Soren’s stuff leaves me befuddled but I can choose to read and glean what I can or follow the comments and gather something there or move on to others.

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Posted by q on May 13, 2009, 06:24 PM | #

Intellectualism not balanced with physical training, skill development, and physical service to the group promotes behavior which serves Jewish interests.

That there is a prime example of pretzel logic!

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Posted by danielj on May 13, 2009, 08:40 PM | #

some intellect.

Some intellect, not intellectualism.

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Posted by Lurker on May 13, 2009, 09:51 PM | #

I’m still hoping for a blinding insight on the “subject without confines”, it sounds great but…

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Posted by Fred Scrooby on May 13, 2009, 11:54 PM | #

Soren’t poetic style has points in common with that of Gerard Manley Hopkins.  In a thread over at Prozium’s,
http://www.occidentaldissent.com/2009/05/02/fading-away/ , someone has posted three poems by Hopkins:  “God’s Grandeur,” “The Windhover,” and ”No worst, there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief.”  Anyone reading those Hopkins pieces who has also read Soren’s writing will see what I mean.

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Posted by cladrastis on May 14, 2009, 12:11 AM | #

I’ve read this poem several times, but I still don’t have a satisfactory interpretation for the last third of it; who is johanna? and is “sloot” Schrodinger’s cat?

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Posted by Fred Scrooby on May 14, 2009, 12:17 AM | #

Soren’s stuff also has points in common with Vachel Lindsay’s.

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Posted by GR on May 14, 2009, 07:33 PM | #

I don’t know about that, Fred. Both are kinda nutty, but Lindsay wrote pretty close to real poetry; where Soren’s “work” is the stuff of any collegiate lit mag: pointless jumblings of words—very modern. CvH pulls it off sometimes, and I am not one to praise that fool.

I think Soren’s just trying too hard to impress himself.

By the way, I posted the Hopkins at OD. I don’t believe Hopkins and Soren share anything beyond the most superficial toying with words; this is because Soren isn’t really a poet. Gorboduc’s a poet. I bet GW could squeeze out a few if asked. What Soren writes is pomo drivel. If even three lines of the above “poem” were reproduced under a different name, in some pussy collegiate lit mag, most of the few who praise him for this crap wouldn’t think twice about ignoring it as senseless poetic pulp.

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Posted by Fred Scrooby on May 14, 2009, 07:37 PM | #

“By the way, I posted the Hopkins at OD.”  (—GR)

What dishonesty keeps you from sticking to one pen name?

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